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I Am.............

I am a woman
I am on the prowl
be on the look out
be careful
beware


I am a woman
see my mane
flow down my back
silky long and brown

I am a woman
here me roar
it is a cry of anger
of my heart being denied
if you listen
you can hear my roar
deep into the night
I am young woman
my steps not so graceful yet
but I am a woman
I am a woman
watch me prowl
watch as i watch you
to see what i need to do

I am a woman
watch me as i search out my prey
lying low my pain hiding me
I continue to search
looking for a way to kill the pain
this time the pain will not over power me.

I am a woman
I am strong
I am proud
and with one last roar
I am letting go
of everything that has hurt me.
As this young woman curls up tonight
no memories will haunt her
I let let go of those when i roared at
the mountain top.

what should i have donr differently

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  • abuyi
    October 6
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    stunning

    awww!!! this is my fav from you. stunning write


  • Floatational
    October 4
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    Lovely simply lovely!!


  • loche
    October 4
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    This is very nice work! Love the reference to a lioness. Keep it up.

  • Cries of Hell
    October 4
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    yo!!

  • Cries of Hell
    October 4

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    its absolutely fantastic dear.absolutely fantstic.i liked the way u described a women.here's a 4 ur good work.hope u dont mind


  • Dark Otter
    October 3
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    You make a nice lioness!

    Your roar has overwhelmed me. A powerful form of self expression for this young woman.

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