I was born on the blue,
a place so cool you cant believe it's true,
from the birds that fly up in the sky,
and the flowers down below,
Earth's beauty has always been irresistible,
in daylight, in sunset, or midnight,
earth has always brought joy to it's beloved life,
when the elements dare go wild,
let not thy spirit be broken,
but rejoice for earth's might,
bless the beauty of the earth,
our wonderful gift sent from above.
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welcome to allpoetry
that was wonderfully done, and agree with my fellow greeter in that you will do well as long as you keep pen to paper and learn. well done young poet, well done.
please keep up the writing, and thanks for joining the site and sharing you words with us,
cheers



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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is excellent, especially for someone so young. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, and found myself quite impressed by your poetic skill. You, like fine wine, will only get better with age.
Welcome, and happy writing!
Laura
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