In quietude lingers our lost passion,
night shadows return love softly.
Whispers upon an evening breeze,
as jasmine permeates the air.
Memories allow thoughts to delve deep,
within, where true love never dies.
In darkness, how I miss you so,
I know morn will come, silent as a sigh.
Author notes
Contest is...
In under 50 words,finish your poem with this line -
...I know morn will come, silent as a sigh.
In a list
A contest entry
- Silent as a Sigh by Ken-Maverick.
700 points, ended October 9, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Labor Day,
Comments
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Very sweet and touching Sandy. You always know how to communicate the truth of love.
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Very Beautiful poem. I love the tender emotions that you show in this. Excellent job my friend. You always had a way of showing such intense emotions within your words and still do. Good luck in the contest.
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JUDGED!
Nicely penned on the prompt, well done.
Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest.
Ken -
Brilliant take on the prompt
Love the entire piece
but the last stanza is awesome
Very beautiful and loving
Wish you the best in the contest
Much love my friend
David
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As always I come away with a sense of inner peace whenever I read one of your poems Sandy, excellent poem for this prompt and thanks once again for sharing you great talent.
awannabepoet
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sandy
your becoming a raid romantic gal. seems your poetry is even more passionate and beautiful. excellent work poet.
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A beautiful poem and splendid
take on the prompt Sandy !!
So much said in so few words !
Thank you for sharing it was a
pleasure to read - indeed ...
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Thanks A Bunch Easy
Your comment is so nice and always appreciated. Hugs and Smiles over many miles.
Bless You
Love, Sandy
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