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let's exchange

let's exchange
pleasantries in a garden filled with pleasant
trees, no sleaze, just bees and birds
and flowers and life surrounding us. no
schoolwork hounding us no
parents either, just hand-holding.

So, what do you think?

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  • Ohms Law
    October 4

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    I feel like you read my mind except in better words. The "no parents either" threw me way off the flow, though, I dunno if that was intentional or not.

    I like seeing more poems from you, I seem to be on a dry spell, stupid homework...


  • chloris
    October 3
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    niice i would like that. this reads really cool.