Time goes by so fast,
soon this day will become the past.
The next ten years will soon fade,
just like the last decade.
Life goes on,
death comes around.
But my love for you will never die away.
People change,
nothing remains the same.
Except my love for you.
Time passes,
but memories never die.
Neither will my love.
People give up on love,
but I never will.
Love fades and hate grows,
but my love for you is forever.
Feelings grow and weaken,
but I'll never live without you.
They say we'll never make it,
I'll prove them wrong,
cause a life without you,
is no life for me.
I love you Brian Lee
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I'm not really sure where this came from but I like it so it doesn't matter if you diss it. cause in my heart this is how i feel
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Good Change
I just wanted to say that the change in format and style is perfect.
It realy makes the Poem jump right out at you.
Love it excellent style choice.
Would Love to see some more writes like this.
PapPaw
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Heartfelt
I do not know who Brian Lee is , but he is blessed to be so loved for now until forever is a very long time. That is what so many of us long for an everlasting love.
All the best to you,
Cheryl
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beautiful.
no other words can describe it.
well done and thank you.
♥ Andi.
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Beautiful write
I feel this is the best Poem you have posted on AP. It is so full and so deep.
It just seems to have it all Love, Emotion, memories Such deep feelings .
The flow is so smooth . I could tell from the very first line to the last.
That this was coming from the depth of your Heart.
Because I believe that so great a Love only comes once in a Lifetime.
Also a touch of "Rhyme" here and there just makes it even greater.
Love You.
PapPaw
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this is a great write. I would love to see more of your writes
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