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(Avert Your Eyes)



Her licks unzipped his bag of tricks
and as he melted fingers slipped...
she gripped his gift, a monolith,
that gently, met a crimson rift...













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How very unlike me to pul l such a piece from nowhere... hope you like it!!!

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 22

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    Written so very deftly, and still left me a little pink! Well-done. Lita


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 20

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    im truly red in the face omg
    this poetry what have i asked 4 lol
    this is so darn sexy omg whew
    good luck in the contest


  • whyspr gold member
    October 4

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    Oooo Majorly sizzling stuff! The imagery is za za za zoom too, lol. A completely sexy and erotic poem with no nasty in it at all. It definately gets the imaginative juices flowing. Very well written. It rocks!


  • blackrabbit. gold member
    October 3
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    um wow! O.O

    nicely done!


  • tigerrose110203
    October 3

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    i like it! lol. short, sweet, and to the point...ish.
    found myself licking my own lips in responce. great write!

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