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Mi Amor


Serenity and bliss
streams from your finger tips
as oh so very gently
they stray across my neck...

Dreams and sensuality
emit from our duality
and oh so very tenderly
your lips open for breath...

Sweetness and sincerity
encompass the dexterity
with which you very carefully
exact upon my flesh.

Let not one moment come to waste
although our lust it mounts in haste...
embrace that is so heavenly,
my darling angels' bless...










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  • annother gold member
    October 12

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    B e a u t i f u l. Your words come across so sensual and gracefully penned. Lovely piece. Thank you so much for your entry, best of luck.