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Whispers From Heaven's Tears




Spiralling from heavy skies,
dancing dimples
soak this parched day
with whimsy's fine tunes.

Then evensong whispers,
"Here, I bring you silvered ease
from your dark silhouette.
Dance with me beneath
heaven's tears,
to wash away cold thought
and twirl into an energetic future
of fresh smiles
and gentle love".







Author notes

Let the rain kiss you. Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby. ~Langston Hughes

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 4
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    Ooh. This was beautiful. Great job with the quote you chose.
    Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • individuality gold member
    October 4

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    a good piece of poetry penned, dancing dimples - that makes me think of little mad feet on the face, i never mentioned a crow at all! i was thinking more of fishcakes, with breadcrumb legs!


  • Denerica
    October 3

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    Rain down on me... I use that sound in my sound machine when it is too cold to run the air conditioner, this is beautiful, to be saturated, cleansed, renewed that has to bring a smile to our faces. Delightful and inspirational. Blessings.


  • penman gold member
    October 3
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    Excellent

    Such a great write for the prompt. And always so very well done. Best of luck in the contest