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Forget titles. I can never come up with them anyway.

October 3, 2009. 5:19 AM. <3

This
is
it.
The feeling inside
I'm trying to hide
has taken
me over
completely.
I am now consumed.
There's nothing to do
but sit here outside
and wait.
Perhaps if I do
I'll then know
the truth.
That nothing
in this life
is sacred.
I wonder tonight
if life by your side
is worth it
or if I am wrong
to want this to be
this you
and me.
To pray for
and love it
don't break it.
My heart wants you
to want it too
and I don't know
if it could take it.
Just hold
my hand
and try
to understand
that we're here
there's
no mistaken.
Fall into me
just let go.
The wind all around
colors show.
The you
and me
that longed
to be
Has never
to fear
or cry.
You're here
and I
will be
there too
as soon
as life
allows...

Author notes

So in my lit class I have on Tuesdays and Thursdays, my teacher defined a poet the other day as someone who loves words. Who will manipulate them and use them in any order possible just because it looks or sounds pretty... I like to think I'm one of those poets. I think I had forgotten that.

I'm trying to get back in a writing mode...

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Comments


  • LuthienIdril
    October 31
    Edit | Reply
    I like this one too. You can feel the emotion in it too. Such power behind the words. I like it!

    • Jazzyjune
      October 31
      Edit | Reply

      Well thank you again:)

      I am glad. You're opinion really matters to me:]