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the eternal watcher

The night is clear
no  clouds shroud the moon
and she listens like a patient confessor and confidant
as I recount my stormy day.

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Prompt/ No one but night, with tears on her dark face watches beside me in this windy place. By Edna St. Vincent Millay

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 4

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    Very good poem. I like it. The brevity coupled with the imagery and emotions was brilliant. Please put the quote you chose to be inspired by in your AN.
    Thank you.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • chinmay
    October 3
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    A classic verse - rich in tenor, deep in substance.