My stars now sing a thousand songs
that they can never learn,
for they are novas spewing dust
at the point of no return.
A contest entry
- he found peace in the stars by Aussie Gypsy.
400 points, ended November 22, 34 entries
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Great!
The poem is very good. I like how you made the second and fourth lines rhymed. I noticed that your other lines don't rhyme. Was that intended? But now that I look closely at those lines I see some repeated sounds.
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