You read your poems oh so deep
Pray this blade takes this heep
And if I die before you wake
I pray you see i was a fool to fake
Fake i was done with these emotions
As I sit in this kitchen crying tears
Tears held back for so many years
I was a fool to think, a fool to hope
As i cry i pray someone wakes to hold me
And tell me its ok and everything is fine
But no one came, as i sat for hours
But you were the one that came all those times
And now it is you that is the cause
I shouldnt have never called you
For it only brought back the pain
Of oh so many years of love
And now i write this as the blood pours
Pours out of my thick veins
So goodbye my fish, may you live happily
With that man that has brought you down
Down to hurting your bestfriend
Without ever realizing it
Author notes
i called my friend with a foolish hope that she remembered the love we once shared, but i was a fool as it only brought back the tears, not to return to her for i am with the love of my life but with a hope, that she still cares....lilly if you read this im sorry
honest oppionion
Comments
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poor tipsy, i know who this is to... wow
the last stanza totaly gave it away...
cheer up though u at least have this lilly chick.
and now the poem,
Amasing rhyme, and i know u don't realy like 2 use rhyme and its great.
good rhythm to, except in the last stanza u kind of trail off, but thats ok the meaning is there. it's verry deep and i like it.
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i don't know what to say
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oh please esgon don't let this be a suicide note. you are a great guy. a lot of people care for you. it doesnt matter if one got away you have someone that loves you with all her heart
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