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anew

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one loves another

no inhibitions due

just being us  -- anew


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  • hugh wyles silver member
    October 3
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    Dear Petra,

    your words are very true

    when passions flame anew

    between the hearts of two

    who whisper "I love you".

    ~~~

    True thought, beautifully voiced.

    Umere e arohanui XXX Hugh.