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Key Change

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When rhyme scheme frames dimensions few suspect
then climb dream flames, intentions true, respect.
No boundaries, no limit locks the mind.
so sound are these,  throw spirit blocks behind.
Reach out, think, skein, words hidden blind reject,
speech doubt, ink vain, chords bidden bind, select.
Avoid inconstant compromise unkind,
a void-spin instant, dumb surmise. Unwind
extrapolations lazy, circumspect,
examinations mazy. Reconnect.
Free frequencies from spectrum fee assigned,
see sequence, seize connections realigned.
Sell static short, key change, unbattern hatch,
elastic thought, free range, fun pattern match.

 

 

 

 

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Each syllable in each couplet rhymes with the corresponding syllable in the line with which it is coupled ... Enjoy !

 

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 18

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    i adore this type sonnet... very well done!

    thanks for entering the contest and best of luck!

    love, becca

  • Lovely sonnet on poetics which says so much to and for each indivual author. May wise words to follow if only heeded.


  • sinfull
    October 3

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    This style reads so very cool. The sound adds such new dimension ... makes me want to try it...looks very fun. great job on this! =)