Under development
time unmeasured,
still existing
I assure
today is everything
is nothing
is the same,
perpetual life enduring death
today, is yesterday
never did
procede, digress
as gray sets
Author notes
untitled 3 contest
A contest entry
- Author Unknown # 3 "Untitled" by BluesMan.
3500 points, ended October 12, 23 entries
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i really liked this poem,
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-nuff said.
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This is a stark representation of the prompt as it shows the total acceptance of an un changeable situation. You have captured the void of gray quite litterally and completely.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Bill
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great write! It's short and yes it gets to the point, thanks for the read.
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' today is everything
is nothing
is the same, '
intense line, i really like this. Short, sweet, to the point ! Good write, good read, can't complain.
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Very well expressed.
Make every day special. Kiss your pillow and it may give you dreams!
Love
Myra
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Interesting title, and yes we seem to go on no matter what as below more or less stated. You say a lot in such few words, that's a gift in itself. Good luck here.
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These kinds of poems to leave an open space to no titles, fun contest huh, your words are profound, today is everything and if you want to title this later after the contest then maybe it could be...Assured Existance, or Existing. It made me feel like we go on no matter what...or what is going on around us. Inspiring to me actually. Excellent. Blessings.
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