There are many things to remember:
Must I forget –
hunger that flows in rivers
bridging desires
and vulnerable souls
with rainbows of senses?
warmth that triggers fireworks
melting longings
and molding tomorrows
with streams of wonders?
depth that craves wholeness
discovering pain;
mocking at youth
with necessary disgraces?
heaviness of your soul
gripping me in awe
feeding me insatiably
with hunger? With hunger!
Always with hunger.
Author notes
image credited to http://community.livejournal.com/ru_glamour/tag/lisa%20cant
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A contest entry
- Jury of Your Peers...#20 by islekine.
700 points, ended October 4, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Insightful comments are truly appreciated
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this is awesome hun love the way you take this prompt and the message derived for this splendid pen Hugs Angel♥
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A very intriguing poem which gave me pause to sit and ponder over your words for a while.
Good luck in the contest.
Bill
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perfection
I love every haunting and intriguing word. Magic!
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This was beautiful and full of imagery and emotion.
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I like how you worded this poem. It's great
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Nicely penned!
I usually don't like repetition...but in the end...it worked well!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
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This is amazing.
Good luck in the contest
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Good job. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Sam I Am
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Definitely one of your best writes.
Nice imagery and a good take on the prompt.
Best of luck in the contest kabayan.
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