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What my heart feels

          I feel as angry as the mad elephant
          Charging through the crowd and powerful.
          I appear as inert as dough on the wooden chopping board
          While I boil inside like the earth which carries in its womb the lava.
          And while i hold myself tight to restrain from falling apart into shreds
          I can see the love I carry for you son,  like a dove perched above me
          So white, so soft, so tender.
          I tend to it son, I tend to it.
          I believe you are a man and you do not need me at all.
          You refuse to look at my love.
            Take it away, I am just a woman of 55
            Worried about cholesterol levels and exercise and not fitting into
            American clothes and unpainted toenails.
            Just a tired woman with grey at the temples
              Standing in the check-out line.
            Love is looking into my eyes and saying,
            "Yes, I know, mom, how much you love me"

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