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Love Under the Moon

Crying inside
Would I ever be enough?
Or were your tears of a pain
A pain I'd never see

Destiny and fate
The drive until the end
I need you here tonight
And every night until death

But cry, you do still
Pulling toward me
Your protector
Will you ever be healed?
Will you forever feel broken?

Your hands, so cold
chilling this part of me
This part that beats
Though its existence is clouded

But I feel whole
And you've never felt so alive
And under the full moon's watchful eye
Did I prove my love
Against your naked flesh

And under the full moon's watchful eye
Did I taste your wine
In exchange of my own

You were afraid
We were alone
And under the full moon's watchful eye
Did we become one

Author notes

OMIGOD! I always said I'd never do it. I always said I couldnt BRING myself to it, but I did. My first ever sexual poem. Wow.....Crap. What if it sucks? You be the judge! lol

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  • EternalFyre
    October 3
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    A interesting, lovely and moving poem indeed.


  • Rainbow7
    October 3
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    And under the full moon's watchful eye
    Did I prove my love
    Against my naked flesf?

    It's a beautiful poem...