the slave is free
to give in totally
to her desires
it is the master
who must bind himself
with his own will
power is an illusion,
control is a myth.
In the dark world of S&M
It is the master who serves
and the slave who controls
the master listens
for safe words that
define his limits
the slave is released
of all inhibitions
a fettered liberation
the master loves his slave
although he pretends not to
and carefully avoids doing harm
the slave loves the master
and trusts him completely
powerful orgasms are her reward
in the end, both are content
Author notes
Written April 8th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- BDSM....what is it and what does it mean? by shimmer.
300 points, ended March 11, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellant and so spot on this is a beautiful write so touching and beautiful shows the other side to this lifestyle! well done and good luck xx Cheryl
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the master loves his slave
although he pretends not to
and carefully avoids doing harm
the slave loves the master
and trusts him completely
powerful orgasms are her reward
this really caught my eyes, but then again, who can argue against that reward?
In the dark world of S&M
It is the master who serves
and the slave who controls
this stanza really makes one stop and think about your words. i don't think i have ever heard it put this way before. very good job on this and thank you for entering and good luck.
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Truer words were never spoken about this beautiful lifestyle. Excellent and very worthy of praise and applause.
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BRAVO!!
WOOOOOOHOOOOOO!!!!...AT LAST!!! Someone who truly understand the meaning of a BdSm relationship!!!...I am very impressed with this one babe..you have hit the nail totally on the head!
Well DOne..
Very good write..
KATT>>>xxxxx -
Tahutihop~
Thank you for your second Erotic entry
I will be back to make my comment
Right now I am just looking
And s~l~o~w~l~y absorbing all of it
Best wishes to you in the contest~
Big hugs and much love~Desire
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Great
Well, doesn't that just sound extremely fun...or is it just me? Really liked this, definitely turned me on...anyway nice write.
~Dana -
I agree you know they talk alot of shit to each other but they are in love with each other's thought's and images what can I say I an im love punish me but don't beat me down
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This was another good poem not really enough passion in it but I still liked it thanks for the poem and lots of love Robin...aka SH
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