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Tiny Little Shamrock

Silver silk streams across my neck
a touchstone, a safe place
Always it brings me memories of you
calming me, stealing my worries
Constantly reassuring of your love, your care
clever trick, I can't see through it

Silver silk swims over my eyes
blinding me, choking on you
Still it soothes, and tricks my senses
confused memory, are these real?
Emotions are taking me over, rolling me
a labyrinth, cold stone smiles

Silver silk swarms my head now
these thoughts, are they mine?
Carefully considering your words, I fail
cannot break free, dark inside
What you say and do does not coincide
run away from, or run to?

Silver silk slowly steals some pieces
hiding them, hiding me
Gently prying away my fragile identity
walls fall, hands raise
Becoming what silver silk determined to make me
give in, lay in wait.

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  • Fantastic poem

    Very very scary effect that stupid necklace had.


    • EsotericCure
      October 5
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      Hey, I like that necklace. It's adorable, and my favorite symbol. I need to get rid of the effects of that though. -_-


  • Question
    October 4
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    i like it.