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The Game

You took the best of me
Took off without the rest of me
And I'm stuck here
Dealing with what's left

And all I have
Is this hollow heart
To show for what we had
And all I have
Are these hollow words
To show me who I am

But I never knew
Because I left it all to you
I never knew
So what am I supposed to do?
No I never knew

I lost me when I lost you.

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