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Flaunting a skeleton



Scrutinize young minds
Irreparable habits declare your soul
Zig zag on your hidden skin from the guilt
Expressing nothing anymore; you have shut the door

Zealous at reaching that goal every day
Every calorie counted secretly
Rigorously worked off         { not working }
Overdosed!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

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word - flaunt

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  • moaner
    October 11

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    blunt, and very much to the point. talking of size zero, my diet has failed! i do put it down to my once a month thing, so i can't blame myself. i would have fainted if i carried on the way i was. i will try again in a couple of days. at least i know i can do it properly now. and you must let me borrow that bloody book! don't worry though, i never want to be a size zero, or do anything this poem tells.

    an incredibly harsh reality for some. i'm sure this would be hard for some people to read, and for you to write! well done missy xxxx


  • PinkeyPromise
    October 4
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    i like this. great write mum.

    ~destiny


  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    October 4
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    God job with the prompt, love the acrostic.


  • awannabepoet
    October 3

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    I love this, you have that way of saying things that I truly do enjoy you know.

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