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Unhinged

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Allure and nastalgia
brought thy beauties fate-
fashioned from enterpries,
Unhinged upon the gate

Of existance and hunger,
upon prophetic hues-
feasting on awakenings
we resonate eternal dues

Fathoming our hauntings
heinious tides protrude,
our guissed bevolevence
our missions permisquous hues.

Vermillion of existance;
you surrender my name and face
sequestering our internal delights
then we relinquish our soul as if to trace

Our one natures true embrace

Custom, as of any other dead
surreanders us empty
and radiant in time of need,
feasting our time at stead

Surrendering in time of haste
We fringe upon times embrace
circling youths disgrace
our figure not merily taste


Transforming hunger and feast
we decompose any our treat
regretting not our fleat
remembering our hearts-beat

We cheat hypnotic compulsions

Surrendering to final requiem
we revive hungers first fringe
tainting  our very last binge
and feast awakened

- unhinged.





 

Author notes

Word bank used: allure, radiant, hypnotic, resonate, verinillion, existance, fringe, requiem,prophetic, nostalgia, protrude, feast, awaken, harmonize, heinous, unhinged, haunted, decompose.
I think that's all the words I used. Looks like there's only 4 I didn't use I had fun with this one. Thank you

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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 23
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    fine print

    this....deep sequestering and well laid...we resonate eternal dues..this line made imprint


  • awannabepoet
    October 12

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    Excellent imagination for this Word Bank poetry, thank you very much for sharing this fun read and your great talent.


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    October 2

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    There's a wonderful vague, mysterious aire to this piece that really shines thought out. It's enhanced by the great flow of your rhyme and choice of wording. I think the wording also gives this piece a classical feel. Liking a warnnig that would be repeated to passer-by who didn't know this tale. Absolutely enjoyed the darkness of this write. I noticed you used plenty of words from the word bank, but please don't forget to add them to your author notes to stick with the guidelines of the contest Thanks for entering this great poem, and good luck in my contest!