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staring up thru the crystalline night,
seeing gods face among the stars,
i begin to wonder,
how will i rise,
losing myself among the heavens,
i begin to feel dead inside,
saying goodbye to this plane of life,
things flashing twixt my eyes,
i'm now living for the dying,
holding up the hand,
thats holding me down

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  • bloom2me
    November 21, 2009

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    Thats really touching.
    Its not very long,but very effective
    I really like this.


  • UnderCoverHayz
    November 5, 2009

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    aww this is sweet! i like it! great job!