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Sensual vs. Sexual. 10/1/09

Sensual:
Soft, gentle kiss, caressing beauty's purest form.
Sexual:
Rough, hurried bites, crushing perfect flaws.

Sensual:
Lips against lips, moving slow, graceful, connecting.
Sexual:
Skin against skin, careless, rushed, painful pleasure.

Sensual:
Smooth entrance, two become one in an elegant dance.
Sexual:
Raw power, dominant and submissive, overwhelming desire.

Author notes

This is the first time in my life when kissing someone is a sensual experience, as well as sexual.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Goddess of illusion
    October 6

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    Well expressed and brilliantly captured... Sensual and sexual is different in its own way, you really outlined them both perfectly...

    I applaud you dear poet...

    illusion