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A Rainy Day

As the rain comes pouring down,
My heart falls like a droplet.
down,
down,
down.
Just another splat in the pitter-patter.
What a depressing afternoon.

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  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    October 11
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    woot woot

    i like this one. I love how you incorperated the rain and the heart together and created imagery. Good job.


  • SidSlyde
    October 4

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    It just rained here for like three days straight. It was messed up. Made me think of that. I like it, well the writing, not the weather.