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Replay

Missing image


smoky conversions
exhaled your sins

monochromatic replay
set in motion

Author notes

prompticture above credit: http://ineedchemicalx.deviantart.com/art/Involuntary-138413786


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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 17
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    nicely done!


  • poetryality silver member
    October 2

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    10 words of wonder. Brevity at its very best. I see the visual from your words without the graphic art. This poem leaves so much room for thought on many levels. I wish you the best in the contest.


    Much Love ♥

    renee