I am dying
not to live through the death
of my own life.
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Profound or pissed. I'm not sure.
A contest entry
- craving by Emmyb.
400 points, ended October 4, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellently said my dearest. youve come back with extra ideas it seems. and theyre better than ever. x x
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Me too!...this is so simple yet so good...Alby
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Well, that's circular. And dark.
Much said in such a lil space.....well done. Hope the light finds you soon.
Blessings,
~ ~ Janet ~ ~
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profound...
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Profound, Scribe. Very.
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hemmmmmm i never thought of a craving that way .....i think you did great
for you... good luck in emmybs contest.....i think its goning to be a hard judge.
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