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Unsure.

I know.
I know about the glances.
The whispers that follow me.
I know that I'm not the same.
I know that somethings wrong with me.
The thing is....
I don't know what.

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  • its-worth-it
    October 27
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    Great. It's very personal, if you think about it, but it's general at the same time. Good Job!


  • saya225
    October 2
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    i liked it better than all of mine