behind this mask
there's only me
its a difficult task
as you can see
to hide for so long
and want somewhere to belong
my hands are stained
with this crimson
my heart is drained
from my ever flowing love
i'll watch you very soon
from up above
don't cry because i'm gone
i know you'll soon be home
in my arms forever
we'll always stay together...
What did you think
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Sweet
I really like wat you did with this.i love that people can relate and that is full of love and passion for a special person.awesome,truly awesome
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thank you so much for the comment ^__^
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I really like it
I think that you really expressed your feelings here. You were basicly saying that no matter what u'll b there for that person It was very relatable
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"my hands are stained
with this crimson"
Very sorrowful, very dark.... I loved it!
Lillie
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thank you ^__^
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awe
that was cute i like the first verse it's really good keep up the good work!!!! you should help me out i'm trying to earn points to make a contest and then if i get all the points you can enter it because your really good
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