Air is my sister,
Earth my brother,
Fire my father,
And water my mother.
And what does that make me
You might ask?
That makes me the spirit
That binds them together.
With my temper
As hot as the sun,
My will
As strong as the earth,
My personality
As ever changing as the wind,
And my mind
With ideas flowing like the rivers.
My temper from my father,
My mind from my mother,
My persoanlity from my sister,
And my will from my brother,
All these elements
Living in me,
Making them the family
I never had.
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You have construted such a wonderful poem here.I love that you use the elements and how they make up a wonderful family.You are very talented and I am blessed to know you and to have read this poem
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I loved how you used all the elements in this, including the one that people forget a lot; spirit. And the rhyme and flow are lovely. Great poem, thanks for sharing. =)
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This was a very good poem to read. I enjoyed it. It was really interesting the take that you took on this using the elements of the earth. It was well written. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!
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this is a good poem. good job it mixes love of the elements with charcteristics of elements
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blessed be ^.^
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