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Leaving...

My heart is feeling heavy, my head is spinning around, I am walking with no destiantion.  My arms are all figdgty and I can't help thinking, did I do something wrong?  I know your not gone forever, you just took a diffrent path, but I can't help but think, will this be the end?  I want to cry, allow the tears to clean my path, I want to scream, to know why you left without even a good bye!  Why did you keep all your pain to yourself, why won't you let me help you with your load.  You may not realize it but the pain you carry is hurting me also.  So please stop running, stop holding your pain, don't leave me.... becuase I don't know how long I can take your pain.

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