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Oyster

Humdrum street in a humdrum town
Do the zombie shuffle through your humdrum day
Sleep work shop tv eat sleep
Moebius stripping through week after year after decade

Or maybe
Stop a moment
Take a very close look
And suddenly see
There’s something precious hiding in that loop the loop
Roll up your sleeves, go digging
And find the pearl
Inside the oyster

Author notes

Quote: . I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free. ~ Michelangelo ~

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 20

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    Wow, this is a really interesting take on the prompt. I like where you took it. Very creative. It leaves me pondering. Great job! Thanks for entering my gazillion prompt contest. It’s an honor to read your work!