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My Love is Like A Beautiful Garbage

What I feel for you is essential
What I feel for you is inevitable
What I feel for you is real
What I have in me is love

What can I do to make you deduce this feeling for you?


How I wish I could literally give you my heart
So you can examine every drop of love that I feel for you
Sometimes I wish that I could open my chest
Take out my heart, throw it away and never love again.


Maybe this love is considered as a beautiful garbage.





© Lislaine Bermudez

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  • Cosmic Musketeer
    October 13

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    I love this! Sort of a bare-bones view of love, contrary to the often poeticized mushy mushy view. I love the first stanza, sort of an indication of where you're going, how the love itself isn't necessarily wanted, but it's there anyway, encompassing your being and controlling your thoughts. Very raw and beautiful.