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Feelings of Love






Your Words ~~
nectar from the Gods;

Your Wisdom ~~
like velvet petals
upon the cheek...

Swelling. Vibrating.
Echoes pound the
walls of the chest;

Breastbone quivers
expectant --
waiting

receptive
to Your Touch
of Healing Grace.

You trace
without word
or sign or sound

outlines of Truth
around
hypnotic blockages:

chakras spinning
inside, outside
of harmony and sync

with All
that IS
Sacred. True. Eternal.

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  • StarlightCerulean
    October 16

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    My skin is still tingling! Quite the imagery. I like it alot! My only..complaint? would be your lack of punctuation but thats just a personal preference