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Promise

Baby I promise that I'll tell u the truth
Promise 2 b your star in your dark nite
Promise 2 bring u up when your down
Promise 2 be your ride 2 die
Promise 2 have u addicted 2 my randomness
Promise 2 have u sprung in good luv
Will i have an obsession?
Probably because I promise you'll b in love with my personality that'll keep you coming' back 4 more.

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