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Palms of time

Missing image

palms of time dab

the tired night's forehead

with a scarf of dawn

 

stars come falling...

 

sad prisoners in dewdrops.

inder

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    October 8

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    Well-crafted with imagery and words.


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  • Mari Goes gold member
    October 3
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    You my friend, shows so much (sights and emotions) with few words, always a pleasure to read your thoughts


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 2

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    "scarf of dawn" - oh, i love that!!! i think i want to steal that line, inder . really lovely, lovely poetry.

    ~ Nicolette


    • inder silver member
      October 2
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      A theft that leaves my ego richer by a fortune!! anytime