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Finding Myself

The silence was maddening
giving up because of no escape
I sat there numb


In just a few minutes
everything would be finished
no more hugs or kisses


In a stage of shock
I pinched my skin
but I couldn't feel anything 


What mattered yesterday
means nothing now
all future dreams vanished


Finally....
I stopped thinking

 

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  • September Daydreams
    October 2

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    The last lines are my favorite.If only I could stop thinking...my life,my existence would surely be a bit more normal.I think that in here you're talking about spiritual suicide.You chose to die,cause could not deal anymore with it.This kind of death is the worst.Simple,yet true and powerful.


  • JinSays gold member
    October 2

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    yeah, I like this.
    there's a bitterness to it that I find very relate-able.
    excellent penning. love,
    jin