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Sweet and satisfying
Lovely long rod of goodness
Mmmmmm, I can't get enough of it in my mouth
I would do this all day long if I could


The flavour that hits my taste buds is so amazing
The best I have had in a long time
Smooth as silk as it slides down my throat
I gobble down all I can in one go


Mmmmmm, I love chocolate



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Written April 8th, 2004

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  • robotinpurgatory
    February 28
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    This is not an exaggeration. chocolate is that good.

  • IIstardustII
    April 14, 2004
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    that poem isnt long but i love it. its so cool how you end up talking about Chocolate. i was woundering beofre that...hehe well done!
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  • sanity
    April 9, 2004
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    You didn't have to write one just for me, I think this is absolutely fantastic, it's sensual, it's seductive but most of all, it's chocolate.......Mmmwwwaaaaaa

    Take care

    Sanity
    Edited on Apr 09, 5:08 because ''.


  • fLyAnGeL
    April 8, 2004
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    hahahahahahaha oh my goodness i was wondering what you were talkin about good job hittmann you gave me a good laugh hehe XX