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Life Grows Still

I walk about
in fallen leaves,

clutching at grains
of skin-biting sand

eroding memory's
sinking shore

A contest entry

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  • sgking123
    November 16
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    wow

    grains of skin biting sand..i really dug that one..i may use it myself somewhere someplace wher i do find it relevant.this poem was asuccinct staement of growth and never standing life.beautiful.


  • LeilaJayne
    November 14
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    Short a simple... yet very poetic with a kinda intense beauty. I liked this
    Thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest... x