Kitchen chaos always brought out
the writer in me.
The loud disruptions;family bickering;
food aromas lingering in smoke filled air...
I am at peace.Truly calm in chaotic times.
And as I write; my puppy sleeps by my feet...
Oh yes;I truly am calm.
A contest entry
- Bring me to your place by Emmyb.
1000 points, ended October 2, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your imagery is really good here.
You provided such a vivid picture of the scene going on here,
and help give a concrete picture to the reader. -
be careful to put spaces after your punctuation.
this is a good write - the content is all there.
well done
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