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~Certain~

 

 

 

 

He was one of those
that came craving a taste
of something

 

 


wild and sensuous

~and found it.

 

 

 

Their desire

slowly braided around

temptations.

 

 

 

nothing, nothing

stopped them.

 


he moves her to see the

deep blues of his eyes, with his

hands, mouth, his whole

being.

 

 

 

 

fills every broken

piece of her.

 



She now finds comfort
in the heat of his body,
as he lays next to her ~

 

 


his hand resting gently
on her breast.



At night,
he whispers poetry

in her ear and brings words

to life.



Touching his hair,
she smiles...

 

 


She wants to be

the one that will someday

see lines of age crease

his beautiful face. 



As constant as the water
rocks up against the shore,
she is forever certain

 


of his love.

 

     ~

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I love him with all that I am.
being loved by him is something that is so
magical, a gift, to me.

For you,

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  • toomysterious
    November 19
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    Perhaps, a romantic interlude, perhaps true and everlasting love, all beautifully wrapped like a gift.


  • My Chronos gold member
    November 14
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    Ah she wants to grow old with him. I adore it. You could write a book Rend...


  • sgking123
    November 8

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    heart warming

    one line caught my attention for real good..filled evey broken place in her..this is profound...I presume it is not the physical imagery that you deploy here but also the mental and spiritual imagery..a lot many broken crevices hold sway there as well..rend you enamour me so passionately.....


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 7
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    be still my heart for my very breath has been taken

    utterly adoring, and softly sensual;
    romance in its finest form


  • poetryality silver member
    November 2
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    Beautiful! I know these words. I live them... I have been married to my childhood sweetheart for 36 years, more than half my life. I cannot imagine ever being without him. He still makes me blush with a touch, a glance, and a wink. I love my Prince Charming. We were friends as kids and we still are. This poem takes me there and I know we will always be! I am "Certain"!Gorgeous!


    Always ♥

    Renee

  • Marcia gold member
    October 25

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    That is beautiful. It's nice to see a sensual love-type writing that actually goes beyond the senuality and into "forever certain of his love". Very nice reading. BTW I would change nothing. It is great just the way it is and your choice of font was right there. You are both very lucky to have found and kept romance alive. Staying together until lines appear on the face is a precious gift, indeed. Lucky, lucky, lucky, ad infinitem


  • Melee Vau gold member
    October 24

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    such a beautiful dedication of love. my fav lines:
    "Their desire
    slowly braided around
    temptations."
    and the final lines:
    "As constant as the water
    rocks up against the shore,
    she is forever certain

    of his love."


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 23
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    very beautiful and sensual melting here


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    October 18

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    Your words flow like soft silk across the page, you are very talented and I stand In awe, you have taken sensual and made it your own

    I wish you all the best In everything you do

  • well done. i wish i had someone like that. but sadly no one yet... still hopeful though nice job!


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 16

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    Bountiful~Beuatiful...


    Blessed is the one that can feel the giving-receiving powr of love. "Certain" sings with a mellifluous sensual voice. I like it.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • chael
    October 10

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    You have found it,

    true uncomprimising unceasing real love. How very, very fortunate you are indeed. It's one thing in life that eludes me endlessly. Ah but I don't really care, or at least that's what I tell myself. You write beautifuly and express your feelings emaculately. I am jeolous and elated by your happiness. Great poetry, tip of the hat.....chael

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 12
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      awww you do care my sweet friend and I understand,
      thank you so much for stoping by, your visits are always a
      pleasure s

      with love and blessings

      Rend


  • alivefromlove
    October 10
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    wow... this is very soft and beautiful my friend. i think the last few stanzas are my favorite =) WONDERFUL poem!


  • zappa gold member
    October 10

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    I'm a little taken back by this write. it's a water sign. It reminds me of the lochsa. your words ring loud and soft at the same time. who is the - never mind. I love it though. very subtle.


  • Nevel
    October 10

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    A unusual mix of abstact (a bit), sensuality, and romance....I like your short, but vividly stanzas...and each stanza is somehow different .....beautiful done, Rend
    Erwin

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 10
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      thank you my friend,
      your support is a treasure,
      I will take care of that other
      thingy

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 10

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    This is a very romantic and sensual poem...Each line is filled with such beauty of a love that is shared between two people. I am happily married, but this took me back to another love I once held...Nicely written...

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 10
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      gosh darn it,

      yeah can relate to that too my friend,I will return 2 favors cause
      I am leaving right now to go to the vet, but will come back hope at
      12:00 to comment on yours love and blessings
      thank you so much for your support sss

      love to you my friend

      Rend


  • Glasyalabolas
    October 10

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    It is very sensuous and also very subtley hot, very, very hard to do both in a write.

    Loving, passionate and tender words and the images that some of the lines can counjour up...well, I wont go into that.....

    (and I would have to read such a poem whilst I was lying in bed....lol)

    Good write.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 10
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      you are laughs, but i do aprreciate and value
      anything you have to say, sweeties ssss

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • woodymiles silver member
    October 2

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    A lovely piece. You describe what we all desire, yet sadly not many find. Nice one.


  • Garmond gold member
    October 2

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    Beautiful, peaceful, quiet and dreamy Rend. It has feeling and sense of complete surrender and devotion. Your desriptions leave an impression of being so close and connected. What a wonderful picture of beauty and warmth you express here.

    Smiling at you.


  • Soft-Rain
    October 2

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    This my girl is most "certain" wow a real beauty and any man would be honored to read this and have you sweetheart.
    If they don't they are a fool!
    I loved each line every line drips of love..ya know i really think it is hard to write something this wonderful without feelings behide it.
    I want that magic stuff Tim could sell too! lmbo
    Maybe just maybe it will spill on me soon and i will be floating like everyone else around here..

    Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful!

    Love,
    ~Lisa~

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 10
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      <

      Lisa, you are a real treasure to me and I am sure that
      the love bug will hit you when you least expect it,
      I just love your comment sweeties

      Love and blessings

      Rend


  • jazzcat gold member
    October 2

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    Wonderful, romantic, sensual...you didn't leave out anything. What a wonderful gift to your "one". I love the originality of this and how it all blends so well. It must be love! Good luck in the contest!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 10
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      <

      thank you so much Dane!! s
      your comments are a treasure

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • JinSays gold member
    October 2

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    oh, this is lovely.
    I want a man like this.
    where is he???...lol
    beautiful. this is simply beautiful and original and wonderful.
    love,
    jin


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 10
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      <

      you are so adorable,
      I know you can find someone just for you
      love to you

      Rend

  • words can not express that kind of feelings i got from this, and reading it i could only just sit in awe, keep it flowing

  • catstar
    October 2

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    This is beautiful. So sweet and gentle. I felt the love you feel for him inside my own heart as I was reading this. It took me into a different world where is special and may be long lasting. Thank you for showing me that love does not have to hurt.

    Great write. Thank you for sharing.


  • SteveS gold member
    October 2

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    I love that notion to desire seeing the lines of age on ones face, growing old together. This is the truest love on earth. Great write.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 2

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    jesus..

    how terribly sweet and touching! wow.. what a lucky guy.. you penned a beauty lady...


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 2

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    Simply Beautiful!

    Wow! This is absolutely beautiful and just flows with so much passion. It's so clear to see how much you care for him. Every line in this is really wonderful and I am glad that I read it! I love the imagery and the tenderness that flows throughout this. BRAVO my friend and all the best to you with this write! Always a pleasure to read you!




    Jeremy0826


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2

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    Nothing else can be said other than.. beautiful!

    How lucky to be loved and love like this!


  • mravinsky08
    October 10

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    What a nice narrative poem. The spacing between each stanza made me a little restless, I must say. And I had to re-read a few lines as they didn't quite meld with my inner voice. Nothing personal though. "he moves her to see..." this stanza made me very anxious. Take it to mean what you will. Otherwise, nice, simple poem about love.


  • Sparkling pebble
    October 10
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    Gorgeous poem full of real emotion loved reading it


  • ravikochar
    October 10

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    <3 As <3 constant <3 as <3 the <3 water
    <3 rocks <3 up <3 against <3 the <3 shore,
    <3 you <3 can <3 be <3 forever <3 certain


    <3 of <3 my<3 love.<3
    Wonderful verse to sum an awesome love note.


  • poeticcaligirl
    October 10
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    Great poem


  • jackreed3 gold member
    October 9
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    Your words speak to my heart...Please break my spark...
    JackReed


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 9
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      jack spark! ? thank you so much for stopping
      by, its always a pleasure

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 9
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    So beautifully soft and romantic

    What a lucky man!

    Jeff

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 9
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      Jeff,

      one of your comments are like receiving
      a beautiful bouquet of spring flowers fresh
      from the garden, with morning dew still on their
      pretty little heads,
      thank you so much! I am honored

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • Rosefrn silver member
    October 9
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    Wow this is beautiful!


  • wave1080
    October 9
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    awwww !

    i can so relate to this lovely write dear


  • Heroesrox
    October 8

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    Author notes

    If you leave clappies and a comment
    I will gladly return the favor
    --holding you to that.

    and you can do it here. http://allpoetry.com/poem/5774997



    I really liked this. The spacing was grand, too! My most favorite part of this whole thing is actually not the poem. (It's awesome in it's own right, mind you.) I just adore those few lines underneath your "leave clappies and I'll rtf" bit.

    That is so tender and makes me warm and fuzzy, knowing that I feel that same thing you do for my own special someone. Best wishes with this great piece. Hope you win many, many more trophies.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 8
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      thank you so much for stopping by and for the
      clappies,i just read your poem, really good reading and
      most heartbreaking,

      with love and blessings

      Rend


  • imyourxpan
    October 8
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    beautiful

    thats exactly how I feel!

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 8
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      thank you so much for stopping to comment
      and for the clappies, going to your place as soon as i
      finish here

      love and blessings

      Rend:


  • aisunoichiko
    October 8
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    a scene of true romance.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 8
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      thank you so much for stopping to read and comment.;

      love and blessings
      Rend

  • This is so beautiful. I could see everything perfectly. Your imagery is so perfect. This is definately one of my favorites.


  • Perry.
    October 7

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    Your gift is astonishing.
    Every line felt real.
    The tone of each word.
    I will gladly give you claps.



    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 7
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      thank you so much for your comment
      i most appreciate your support.

      Love & Blessings

      Rend


  • xxfallenawayxx
    October 7
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    amazing that isssss love!!!!

  • this was a good poem< i really like it, it reminds me and my love, Vladimir. :


  • awannabepoet
    October 7
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    What a gift it is to be loved by you.

    I always know when I am reading one of your poems Rend, they flow effortlessly through my being and bring me to a new frame of mind.

    Thank you for sharing this wonderful gift of yours and always enjoy reading a new poem from you.


  • xox-sarah-xox
    October 7
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    wow!

  • doris-odit
    October 7
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    rich use of descriptive language. Highly involving. The reader can literally feel what the female xter is feeling.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 2

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    wonderful sentiments you share. there is a magic found in the expression of your final few stanzas - "she wants to be the one ...." very well expressed.

  • Bob Fox
    October 3

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    rend

    and the magnifiecence of love pours from the lips of a splendid poet. the passion, the joy and the longing. fabulous write poet.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 7

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      Bob,
      i am always blessed to have you here,
      thank you so much ss
      with love and blessings

      Rend


  • x-evil cupid-x
    October 3

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    ohwow....p-p..pretty poem...*crys in happyness* it's beautiful...

  • monkey3243
    October 6
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    wow! i abstutley loved it!!!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      i really liked your poem.
      thank you so much for stopping
      by, with love and blessings
      Rend


  • Shadows666
    October 6
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    I Love It...

    Positively perfect....


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      thank you so much for your comment
      and clappies, your support means a lot

      love and blessings
      Rend

  • A very lovely piece that is touching and wonderful

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      thank you so much for stopping
      by, i just came from your page
      and read your poetry, I am glad i
      did, its just stunning,

      blessings and love

      Rend


  • RockstarJohn76
    October 6
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    Nice.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      thank you RockStarJohn,
      i will be visiting you real soon,

      Blessings to you

      Rend


  • Acqua Mossa
    October 6
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    Excellent!

    wonderful and well written!!!!!


  • jackreed3 gold member
    October 5
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    You are a Lucy gal.... wonderful poem, nice form. and very stastful..
    your friend in PoetryJackReed3


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      hey Jack,
      its always a pleasure for you to come and read
      my friend,

      Love & blessings

      Rend


  • Xianaria gold member
    October 5
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    Hi Rend

    I still think this should have gotten the big prize! This is an absolutely wonderful testament to the love you and your incredibly lucky guy share.

    Simply gorgeous. sss

    Love & blessings,

    ~ Tim

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      I read your poetry, and it is well worth the beautiful gold shiny
      i was so happy for you,
      thank you Tim. your a sweeties sss

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 5

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    Now this is sensual, romantic, and well written. Thank you very much for posting this in both contests for me. Best of luck to you with this.

    Riftkin


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      thank you so much for your comment,
      i was really blessed with The HM
      blessings

      Rend


  • Mr Fluent 4 Fun
    October 5

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    Really enjoyed this poem

    Truly beautiful xXx
    Was captivating at every verse and got better and better until "of his love", oh how well those words read at the end is amazing - so deep and sensual.

    Well done
    Mr F xXx

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      Thank you so much for comming to read,
      I will be returning the favor and the clappies
      your support is a real encouragement for me

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 5
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    Very sensual and elegant. Written in good taste. Very good. God bless.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      I am so happy you stopped by,
      what an extra treat i received today,
      gaining a new family member is a blessings
      to me,

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • JamesHardy gold member
    October 5

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    Rend,

    This line is so well put.

    She now finds comfort
    in the heat of his body,
    as he lays next to her

    his hand resting gently
    on her breast

    There's a fine line between intimacy and eroticism. This stanza has an intimacy of many more nights of her nestled in his arms than just those happy occasions when the erotic is also enjoyed. This intimacy sustains us long past when we begin to see those lines crease our lover's beautiful face. It is a time when we find the meaning of "dear" and can say it to our lover with a sincerity and confidence lost to those without the tenure of it.

    Really good stuff!


    Jack



    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      i just so enjoy your comments,.
      you seem to always put things into better
      perspective, and see truly what I have written
      thank you so much,

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • bigperm gold member
    October 5

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    There is a certain delicateness to this piece.

    That feeling that one gets when all inhibitions can be dropped and you feel free to let yourself fall. There is a certain solace in the knowing that you've found that complimenting piece to the puzzle that is love. It seems as if you have, so I wish you the greatest of blessings in that endeavour.

     

    ...and thanks for reading my post for it led me to this, and this is beautiful.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 6
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      Gosh i just love that icon,
      and your comment and clappies
      are such a great pleasure to receive

      with love and blessings ss

      Rend


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 5

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    I think this is quite beautiful!
    I truly, truly love this poem!
    The exact way I feel about my Northern Star
    All the best to you in life and love,
    ~Heavenly!


  • PharrisJ.Wells
    October 5
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    Very well done!
    Great emotion and flow!


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 5

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    Oh so romantic!!
    And to feel so secure in someone's love! This poem is beautiful!
    Bravo
    All the best in the contests!

    Becks


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 4

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    when we have lush, fulfilling thoughts it speaks of the willingness to be happy, to accept something as the answer to a sometimes burning question, I think this is a wonderful statement of gratitude and understanding...PK

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 4
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      thank you so much, for your comment and clappies
      I read your poetry and I will be paying more visits in the
      future

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • davidugo
    October 4

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    This's Great

    This is a wonderful one, brilliantly penned down and a contest entry for that matter. True, Captivating love poem. U deserve the gold in this. Gudluck.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 4
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      <

      love, love, your poetry!!
      thank you for stopping by to
      read,

      love and blessings
      Rend


  • mcjb38 silver member
    October 4

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    Very nice, subtle read.

    There is a part of me that wants to know more about their story! How they met, got to know each other, but that would have weighed the poem down. You showed great skill at choosing a moment in time and conveying such emotion as to leave the reader wanting more without over explaining. Not all poets have that skill!

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 4
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      <

      thank you so much for stopping read and for the clappies
      your poetry is great writing

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • Libralady65
    October 4

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    Beautiful!

    Tender and gentle and beautiful.... Aaah, to feel this way about someone.... this took me back 20 years.
    Excellent write!
    Sheri


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 4
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      <

      thank you so much for stopping,
      your support mean alot to me

      love and blessings

      Rend


  • Sheli silver member
    October 4
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    a lyrical caress for one well loved, senuous and deep


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 4
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      <

      Sissy,
      it is always a pleasure to have you cone to visit
      love to you ss
      Rend


  • Amera gold member
    October 4

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    This is the kind of poem that makes a girl swoon. I'm such a sucker for love poems and especially well written ones. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      October 4
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      <

      thank you so much Amera.

      you are such a treasure to me,
      love to you my dear!! s

      with love and blessings

      Rend


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 4

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    Breathtaking. This is just that. Love it.
    ~~Their desire
    slowly braided around
    temptations.~~~

    ~~At night,
    he whispers poetry
    in her ear and brings words
    to life.~~~

    what a way to live.


    Joe

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