Her nick name was aqua;
primarily because no man;
could ever hold her..
and whenever they tried;
she would slip through their fingertips
like the liquid she was.
free as a wave;
roaming the open sea.
Author notes
Prompt:water.
A contest entry
- quickie. by Kathraina.
500 points, ended October 1, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh wow
so creative and yet so simple!
"she would slip through their fingertips"
love this. I truly do! I wouldn't change one single word.
one of the best poems in the contest!! great work : )
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Thanks,I'm pleased with an hm,I usually don't enter quickies but I liked this prompt.
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i love this! it brings back memories of a childhood dream to be a mermaid
brilliant job with this write!
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Thank you I really appreciate the comment..
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