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You made me

I awake to you laying in front of me,
Only to see you smiling to a picture of someone else on you phone.
You made me feel depressed,
You made the razor lightly cross my wrist.

I look up from the swing,
Too see you hanging with you ex girlfriend.
You hurt me in a way that can never be spoken about.
You made the razor slice into my lips.

I come home to see you naked in the bed,
With yet another girl you bring home,
To seduce instead of me.
You made me break into a million pieces,
That can never be repaired.
You made the razor slice into waist.

Love is just a word,
not from the heart when it comes from your mouth,
So when you tell me your sorry,
You made me dead inside,
And that razor sliced into my heart.
I bet your really sorry now...

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"Love is just a word, not from the heart when it comes from your mouth.."

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  • RazorbladeKiss14
    October 15

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    Wow! This is very vivid and sad, You wrote this from your broken heart and I am truly sorry if something like this happened to you! You made the finalist! That you for entering and good luck to you in my contest!!

  • RazorbladeKiss14
    October 2
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    "Love is just a word, not from the heart when it comes from your mouth.." That's my own personal qoute! Can't wait to read it!!