Oh mind, let thy wander
to hopes,
of what could possibly be
to dreams,
never before been had
to love,
not yet found
The hopes,
formed as just a glimmer.
A small ray,
that when given attention
flourishes and grows
until that hope
becomes a realization.
The dreams,
just a simple thought
becoming more complex
as it is weaved
in and out,
becoming so much more
The love,
formed when one hopes and dreams
that such a thing
can be possible
if you let that small glimmer of hope
and that tiny dream,
flourish and grow
as you weave in and out.
Until you realize,
that what you’ve hoped and dreamed for
with all the attention it’s been given
has become so much more
Author notes
love is built upon hopes and dreams which cascade into so much more
loving someone has to start somewhere
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- Romance Is In The Air...... by Riftkin.
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I love the flow of this and the feeling. Best of luck to you with this in the contest.
Riftkin
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Bravo.
It is so good to see you writing once again. You look like you haven't missed a beat. This kinda reminds me of my fiancee & I, for I am still holding out hope that she & I can finally start a life together. Good one, fellow poet.
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So beautiful waves of the heart and its beats are captured intothe depth of the words..and brought the story behind..well done..and many athanks for sharing it..well done..
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