This poem is to my friend
Not because she needs one
But because she hates predictability
My rhyme scheme she hates
So now I have this surprise for her
See this one is special, and why?
Because there are twenty-four lines
And the twenty-fourth of May
Is very important to me
Also it reflects like mirrors
Can you tell me how?
Here's a hint, there is a rhyme
Read carefully and you might see it this time
Do you finally see it now?
Think fast, cause now it disappears
Now do you finally see?
Oh my god! We'll be at this all day...
Bet you have some library fines
Come now, be honest. Don't lie
You'll be studying these verses for phucking forever
You must truly be hated by all the fates
Failing to see it, this lack of ability
You haven't gotten it. You've failed, I won.
And now this rhyme is at an end.
Author notes
the message is lame but it's meant to be funny not serious! but seriously, there is a rhyme scheme. there are 24 lines. i divided them into two groups of 12. the first counting down from 1 to 12. the second counting from 12 to 1. they meet in the middle of the poem. each number rhymes with its corresponding number. 1 to 1. 12 to 12. and so on...
well whatcha think?
Comments
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Great job man, nice poem. You thought of entering my contest?
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Hahaha, that was funny! I finally got it when I went to the middle and then went down to the next line. That was a good poem, and I wouldn't change a thing in it. Great job!
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