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Choking in Heaven

Wicked darkness enclosing me
Breathing down heavily
Choking in heaven's flames and dust
Heart breaking with bloody lust
Sin's grope me round the throat
Wrapping in a crawling cobweb coat
Leaving me in flames and stains
Nails poking into bloodless veins
Weeping the devil's tongue
All of this is in good fun

Now grasp my hand angel from below
Hide me where the shadow's grow
Steal my painted black eyes
And stow them with the other spies
Tear thy flesh off unholy sinners
And cremate them into plastic prayers
Exorcise my dreams and mind
Tables turning, running out of time
Crucifixion of hopes take place
It seems,six feet under is in good taste

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Shattered---Sanity

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  • Fr33BirdFaLLin
    November 1
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    Very nice write, good job and good luck.