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[ theres so much i could tell you ]

theres so much i could tell you
so much i could show
so many things that you dont know...

what if i was gone tomorrow?
what if yesterday disappeared?
what if these feelings we have are the ones we have always feared?

standing over rain
pushing our hearts away
pain may not be worth this fight...

i can only let you in when i feel its right...


tell me the truth.

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  • TheFirstAngel
    October 2
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    an orgasmic write


  • Naznomarn
    October 2

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    Not much anyone can really know
    So best thing is to try not to care about what may be, and live for today. But yes. Only when it's right!


  • HugsForEveryone
    October 1

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    I hope you're alright. I know the feeling though. Especially the last line. It had a great ending, and it was overall a great poem. I liked it a lot =] Keep Writing!
    ~Kera