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Make of It What You Will...

Hand without hand
A heart left alone
Two lives intertwine
And a third joins
Love so stubbled
Frayed from tears
The stitches long since removed
A cry in exile

Distance, a barrier
Fragile hope, a blindfold
A murky dream
Distortion of judgment
Unresolved, foolishly forget
Sacrifice of self for illusion
Destroy all else
Save the lie

Confusion, a regular
Questions beg an answer
Give up? To what extent?
Love or life, which means more?
Watching an end to existance
Seeking for the gentle words
Te amo, from heart
Soul and spirit unanimous

Predictable, do you comprehend
Are these words just to self?
One thousand, my words
Begging for release
Release only into hollow
Empty and wishing
Tears which never should cry
As my heart walks away.

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