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~~Godiva Chocolates~~(haiku)

Missing image
chocolate dessert
satisfies the soul
glorious rescue

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Pic courtesty of www.google.com..............
I love cholocate but get migraines so bad.........so now I eat white chocolate about 2 times a month....
This box of chocolates cost $65 dollars a pound !

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  • MargaretG
    October 21

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    So sorry that chocolate causes your migraines; I get them from fermentation of grapes. Anyway, there are many other pleasures to enjoy! Cheers and best of luck!


  • Maureen silver member
    October 20

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    Hey Sis! I enjoyed your haiku very much! I'll never know what Godiva chocolates taste like, though. They're too rich for my blood.

    BEST OF LUCK in this contest!

    Love ya,
    ♥ Maureen


  • Draig aine gold member
    October 19
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    yum

    love this ku

  • Purrsanthema
    October 17
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    Lovely!


  • angelica silver member
    October 17
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    Dear Susan, a lovely haiku It's a lovely box of chocolates but boy! It's expensive.
    Good luck in the voting.

    Love Joan


  • catz Moderators member
    October 15

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    The best rescue I can think of, Sis And wow, does that box of chocolates look yummy !!

    A nice haiku and I wish you the best in the contest

    love and
    Dee


  • queen Moderators member
    October 8
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    delicious i could use a box or three right now.


  • pixiestix gold member
    October 5

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    A sweet haiku and glorious rescue! Sometimes that little taste is all we need to set us free of whatever it may be.

    Nicely done Susan. Good luck in the contest.


  • hugh wyles silver member
    October 3

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    Dear Molly,

    When Godiva rode her milk-white steed
    through streets of Coventry
    stark naked though she was indeed
    for anyone to see,
    t'were better if young peeping Tom
    had kept his gaze averted from
    her beauty as she rode along
    and thus not blinded be.

    I see this legend now equates
    with heart-shaped box of chocolates.

    Thankyou for your brief but satisfying haiku and tempting picture.
    Good luck in the voting. Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (Da) R.


    • Blushfulmoon silver member
      October 3
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      Da

      I am not good much at poems like these....I am more into nature...sometimes vampires........and other time just contemporary ones.........so to get a poem entered in the contest........I did a haiku............
      So glad you liked it
      Hugs
      Your castle daughter
      Susan~~~


  • Pattiboo silver member
    October 3

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    If they had had chocolate like these in the garden of Eden they would never have eaten that damned apple

    • Blushfulmoon silver member
      October 3
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      LOL

      Love your reply on this one Pattiboo
      And yep your probably right....had Eve tasted chocolates first the apple would not of been eaten........
      ROFLOL here......thanks for the chuckle I needed that........my son lost $300 worth of money orders for his half of rent etc...we have hunted everywhere...thank goodness had the Direct TV and Car Insurance on my credit card already........will have to ask here at the Food Bank place for help............can't hurt to try they just go by your income....and hopefully will help
      I have such a migraine over this have to get off here......but had to reply at this cuz I got a chuckle
      Many thanks you made my afternoon
      Hugs
      Your castle sister
      Susan~~~


  • doolie gold member
    October 2
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    This is yummy, sis. Now I want chocolates real bad. Great haiku...Best wishes in the contest.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    October 2
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    A yummilitious haiku undeed!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 2

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    Rx for both the good
    and the bad---and
    at a sinful price!!!

    Clever lines, Susan,

    M-C


  • LunaSilverStars
    October 1

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    i could use some chocolate right about now, except in my case, i do not eat candy all too often.. so it is cocoa or chocolate soy milk.. i do love Hershey Kisses though.


  • crivanea silver member
    October 1

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    ohhh!! another haiku chocolaty...yumm...i'm craving some right now ..glorious rescue? haha..not to my waist line i must say

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